Comments for page "RPC-254"

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Mon, 18 Aug 2025 08:49:07 +0000

i gotta say there is potential here in the horror of watching someone slowly slip away mentally, but this article doesn't have much of an effect on me. there are glimmers of a good piece in here; namely the eye floating in the guy's brain and the ending interview, but they are unfortunately overshadowed by the overwhelming amount of weird changes in tense and confusing phrasing ("where he quickly resumed its daily activities"), extremely poor clinical tone ("its now disgusting cell"), and a story structure that just repeats the same things over and over again. the best thing about this article is the title. +1

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Wed, 18 Dec 2019 16:29:54 +0000

Weird sentence structure

Fixed most of what you pointed out in the line-by-line.

and an unnecessary interview that doesn't reveal more about the nature of the anomaly that wasn't expressed via the ending entry to the table of contents.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Show,_don%27t_tell

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Tue, 17 Dec 2019 19:24:24 +0000

2/5. Weird sentence structure and an unnecessary interview that doesn't reveal more about the nature of the anomaly that wasn't expressed via the ending entry to the table of contents.

Line-by-line

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Tue, 17 Dec 2019 19:12:59 +0000

It starts out a little rough but following the CSD's continually deteriorating mental state keeps me from giving it a +2.

Very similar to SCP-983, too.

EDIT: Sorry for my word choice. After taking another look I decided to change my rating to +4.

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Tue, 17 Dec 2019 18:29:08 +0000

Spooky and melancholic. Seeing the CSD's mental state wither away made me upset but also terrified in a way. Giving this 5/5