The religious context of the holy water is cheap and incongruous with the rest of this generic monster article. The focus on "worst fears" is informal and silly, especially in the surface-level way it's used here. Lastly, the second and third addendums describe the same event in a way that is repetitive and uninformative.
It's not purely bad. Besides what I've already mentioned, the delivery and writing are serviceable. The many images are used well. The exploration of RPC-152-2 had me genuinely hooked for a moment, but my enthusiasm was lost when I realized it was just a featureless extension of the already-described effect. Putting something of interest in the dimension would give this article more meaning, but it's limp as it stands.
I listed some positive or neutral aspects in the previous paragraph, but I don't think there's anything at all worth missing about this article. Standard fare for disappointing 2018 stuff, 1/5
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