RPC-168 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-168.

(account deleted) 02 Dec 2018 03:26

I'd like to thank the following users for help:

Hyze, for critiquing my article
Moist Bread, for critiquing my article, helping with the editing, and cowriting it (More particularly, adding the mention of the Nivaldi)
Croal, for informing me that I needed to republish my article
Mr. Makor, for providing the final criticisms of my article

I hope this iteration has staying power.

Last edited on 02 Dec 2018 03:45 by (account deleted) Show more

(account deleted) 02 Dec 2018 03:38

Good job on this entry, the slow effect on the corruption of the text on the beginning of the article really adds a lot to it. While the actual article is kind of short, the description adds substance to the article. I particularly like how the Nivaldi enter into the scene in this piece. Good job, I loved it.

H F Dummie 18 Dec 2018 17:50

The grammar is slightly off in some areas. DM me for more details.

Still, interesting concept. Lots of tale potential here. Really messed me up, especially with the large numbers of grammatical mistakes that I made typing this. 5.

Note from Author:

(account deleted) 05 Apr 2019 18:41

Please stop making grammatical corrections (At least for the first half of the article). Most, if not all, of the grammatical ¨errors¨, were intentional and are meant to display the anomalous effects of the creature. I´m on a break from the site already and it makes my life difficult when I have to take the time that could be used for homework to do this. Not to sound rude, but it gets annoying.

-Sincerely, Ianofdoom2.