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disgusting arachnid anomalies indeed
you should be ashamed
Sent an actual shiver down my spine… not had an article do that before. Not on this site, and definitely not on the other one.
Take your +5 and keep those spiders away from me
Structurally repetitive and 2spooky4me
Such is life in the Soviet Union
This takes 5 paragraphs in the description to get to the actually anomalous part and the anomalous part is “they make fears real.”
Then it’s just people being tortured and then just dialogue that looks like something from a Marvel Movie, and the torture added at the end is just ridiculous I don't know why you thought that was ok. 1 star
For the time it was made in, it was surprisingly advanced. But, it has this strange, inherent awkwardness I can't place. The premise of spiders causing fears with their bite is basic but developed to an interesting point. The dialogue feels as if it should be generic, but it has a certain rhythm and consistency to it that makes it believable. Even the logs at the end feel like they should just be waived off as generic torture for the sake of torture, but it still kept me invested and interested. Albeit, if the nightmares are from the affected subject's perspective, I don't know how she could see her face getting melted off unless it's some weird dream perspective.
I think what makes the article deserve the grade is what makes the dialogue good - the rhythm and consistency that isn't broken, but kept together throughout the article. It creates a genuine style that makes the article a good read.
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