A Timeline of the Anomalous / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page A Timeline of the Anomalous.

JerryJohn 13 Oct 2018 03:03

Did you make a forum post for this? Or did you get discord crit before the forum rule was implemented?

Redtide 13 Oct 2018 03:16

I got some criticism sometime ago, although i wasn't fully aware of tales needing crit. Feel free to give it now, but know this is a progressive piece. It'll be updated every time something becomes official. And i know it mentions a few unofficial things right now, but i'm invested in helping make them official to ensure they pan out

JerryJohn 13 Oct 2018 20:29

Tales do need crit. You also need to have a forum post in which evidence of criticism is visible. Or else your article can be classified as a coldpost.

moist bread 13 Oct 2018 03:25

I do remember me and some other people critiquing the general idea and/or first draft of this in a group dm, and that was before the forum rule was implemented

Von Pincier 13 Oct 2018 23:51

While there are some interesting concepts within the history itself, the way the article is presented is just kind of messy. I know this is a work in progress, but the bits that are 'finished' don't really feel like they've undergone much polish, and at some points devolve into what feels like barely-edited point form notes instead of a consistent narrative. You've also got weird capitalization throughout. 3 Stars until it recieves a heavy, heavy edit or reupload.

Redtide 13 Oct 2018 23:55

Don't worry, i'm looking into fixing it soon

Update: It's been a couple of hours and i've edited most of the draft (as soon as i took a good look through it, i realised how off most of the grammar and bad the flow was. I'm honestly surprised). And i also added in a few more GOIs that i'm supporting to make them official. I've talked with the creators of the GOIs and attempted to keep them very close to how they envisioned them. So far, they all seem happy with what i've done

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Redtide 29 Jul 2019 10:02

I recently added in The union (whose role will once again change due to input from the creator) and i realised i never explained something.

This is a continuously changing piece, which will mention and edit to include big events in the Authority's history AS MADE BY WRITERS. (can't stress that last part enough)

So everything in this timeline that isn't mentioned/seen on the main site, is either being worked on, or I got really lazy, feel free to contact me if things need updating

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Molydeus 27 Dec 2020 22:44

Director Danielle doesn't seem too bright.