RPC-191 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-191.

Add the rating system

DrXOUBLE D 17 Sep 2018 10:48

Add the rating system

mew xd 18 Sep 2018 00:50

"Patrol personnel have also noted unpleasant stenches coming from every instance of RPC-190"

Seems you accidentally put RPC-190 instead of 191.

Gre88 18 Sep 2018 05:51

fixed.

moist bread 22 Sep 2018 19:08

9/10, needs more cowbell
jk i fuckin love it

Von Pincier 26 Sep 2018 17:15

This is in desperate need of more editing and refining- it still feels like a draft, not a finished article.

JimmyBoyHaha 24 Dec 2018 22:05

Ok, so the idea is fine. There was numerous spelling errors and awkward wording, so I fixed that. But this segment leaves me confused:

These entities remain for the majority of the day gathered in the building's basketball court

…What? What building are we talking about here? Is it the mall? It can't be a site, because a site definitely wouldn't have a basketball court. I need this question answered. Giving this a +3.

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Gre88 14 Jan 2019 10:27

Yes, the mall has a basketball court inside it.

JimmyBoyHaha 15 Jan 2019 05:30

Then specify that they are in the malls' basketball court.

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pogchamp 02 Apr 2019 02:28

Anomalous toilets are a very pogchamp idea dude. This article is hella dope, abd your picture makes it creepy! 5 stars :MonkaS:

Kaneurysm 04 Apr 2019 17:08

Everyone gangsta till the toilets start walkin

ThermicLine 14 May 2019 21:40

I don't know why I didn't read this before, great concept for an RPC. There are a few complaints I have, however. First is that you didn't use the footnote system whenever you have a quick note to give. It's a very quick and clutter-free system that you should try in the future. Secondly, I think that the Interview log was way too short, and didn't really add anything that we didn't already know. In the future use interview logs to give a short story on personnel interactions with the object. Overall, solid article nonetheless. 4/5.

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~Kentaro Miura

Vizlox 12 Aug 2019 19:50

This article is funnier than any of the -Js

DoubleDenial 06 Mar 2022 05:02

There's some weak tone here and there.

Currently there aren't any efficient methods of neutralizing RPC-191

A CONTRACTION? IN MY RPC ARTICLE?

Furthermore, based on their particular form of guardianship over intact mall gadgets and toys, they seem to not want anyone to enter the building but them.

This is an odd assumption to make in clinical writing.

Besides that, the article is… fine? I can't help but feel like it's missing something. I dunno. The idea seems half-baked, like it was a working concept that never got expanded upon. It's executed well enough? 4/5