Can't believe this went on for one year without any comments. Anyways, I'll start.
1) I feel there needs to be more info in Iteration 1 - one of the 700-1s should have been at least interviewed, made to write down on describing what they're experiencing or going through.
2) Dark blue is very hard to read against the site's dark background.
3) Missing a full stop in iteration 2 stage 1.
4) For iteration 2 stage 1, are you meaning that interpreting the "verbal, written, and visual memetic content" will spread the "infection"?
5) The evacuation of a site is a huge issue. What happened to the other RPCs within it? There should be an update on Site-162's ultimate fate; has all the steam cleared out and is it safe to move back into? Were any living RPCs killed?
