I got emotional reading this, damn. I think the main problem with this one unfortunately is its a bit too fast paced. Like why does the audio log of the RPC-238-A incident come first before the actual incident, or why the audio log of what happened, immediately start with the younger male saying "Dad?". Makes me think that the dad just key binded his death.
Also maybe another incident log demonstrating how the younger male is doing by himself in a smashed car and/or showing whatever the hell the following physics-breaking cold moon thing is can definitely build onto what is here. An all-embracing adventure. 4 stars.