RPC-760 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-760.

(account deleted) 01 Sep 2018 12:16

I liked the utilization of machinery specifically revolving around a singular RPC/SCP with the added bonus of getting me interested in another RPC.

Also, the fact that you explained this all through scientific terms without once (I think) using the word anomalous or "by unknown means" which is a success in itself. Normally, if this were other authors, technical jargon can get wonky and more importantly, it can increase the scope of your article's definitions simply because even one change to normative processes explained in biology leads to cascading explanations you would need to resolve.

Yours is succinct enough that as a layman, I feel I can grasp it without it becoming too bogged down in feature creep.

Protocol 760-A "Severance"

Big fan of creating procedures that actually make sense and are catered specifically to the entity.

While the entity itself doesn't really evoke anything new for me, I absolutely love the time and effort it took to detailing the chemical composition to internal cell processes.

+5 all the way.

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(account deleted) 15 Dec 2018 23:59

Meatballs in Eyeholes

(account deleted) 16 Dec 2018 00:08

It was a good read, I like how you relate this with 016 without making it feel forced. And you described the containment protocol which is a nice bonus! +5

(account deleted) 16 Dec 2018 00:10

Now 016 needs to be improved…

Minutemen 24 Feb 2019 19:36

In ██/██/████, ████ Davidson have been using the laboratory equipment of his workplace—The ██████ institute—to experiment on biochemistry.

This is grammatically incorrect. Instead:

On ██/██/████, ████ Davidson was using his workplace laboratory equipment at the ██████ institute to experiment on biochemistry.

You choose if you really want to include the em dash, but it's not really needed here.

As for the article, You went into good detail without making things too boring, and has some cool backstory to it. I'd give it a 3.7.

Hellsverg 06 Aug 2019 07:30

The top picture is of a mitochondrion under a light microscope.

https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/e/eb/Mitochondria_in_cell.jpg

The second picture is of a skull of a dead syphillis carrier. Both pictures are in Wikimedia commons.

https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/9/9d/BCH-808-Syphillis-Lo.jpg

760 image source

Unknown_Chan 07 Jun 2020 06:36

The new image (first image you see) is photoshopped by me, and used with my permission.

Gearhart 20 Feb 2022 17:39

I love how this expands on RPC-016… for the most part. RPC-016-5A intercepting the Church of Malthus doesn't really make much sense. Why would she try to help the people who broke into her home and murdered her family right in front of her.

It's not like that happened when she was a baby; she was pubescent at the time of the raid!

edit: also, since both the Church of Malthus and RPC-016's creator (according to this article's retcon, which doesn't really match up with RPC-016, as revolution and evolution are two very different things) had similar goals. Ignoring the inconsistency of this article's explanation of why RPC-016 was created, wouldn't this make RPC-760 against the Church of Malthus's goals as well?

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Gearhart 21 Feb 2022 23:14

Upon further analysis, I decided that I don't like how this expands on RPC-016 at all. It feels more like a retcon than an expansion. A revolution is a usurping of the current governing body to replace with a new one. Giving RPC-016 to everyone would be counter-intuitive to a revolution, since "everyone" includes the people you're trying to usurp.