I really like the concept being worked with here, however, I do think that there was a lot of unnecessary use of "RPC-109" when an "it" or "they" would have been good enough. Other than that I think this is a really good idea for an RPC and I'm glad to see it on the list.
Dreams. Each man longs to pursue his dream. Each man is tortured by this dream, but the dream gives meaning to his life. Even if the dream ruins his life, man cannot allow himself to leave it behind. In this world, is man ever able to possess anything more solid, than a dream?
~Kentaro Miura