RPC-523 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-523.

Professor_JD 07 Aug 2018 11:05

Test log 08, space out the results a bit, other than that. It's a decent instrumental RPC

H F Dummie 15 Sep 2018 01:36

It's an X that makes people use it.

I think you're better off making it so that the people play the piano willingly.

Also, I suggest watching the clinical tone, because the clinicalness of this article feels kind of limited.

2 now.

JimmyBoyHaha 10 Feb 2019 06:11

It's just a thing that kills you. +1

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oh yeah yeah

Versace_Kisses 13 Apr 2019 18:16

The aesthetic of this article speaks to me.

GrammerPoliseCheif 19 Sep 2019 07:27

It's a pretty okay piece.

To the author: Are you still around? I'd like to discuss with you on how to improve the article.

It could do with a picture. Any pic of a white baby grand piano, and just insert a caption of how it's freshly fed or something.

Maybe include a recovered note that may possibly hint to its origin.

You should still include test logs 1, 2, 3, 4 and 7. It's odd to see them missing - at least write them down and strikethrough them or something and say they've been expunged of data or whatnot.

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