Maybe try using more clinical language, "capable of moving around" is a little too casual.
There should’ve been more info on how new instances act in more detail but other then that it’s fine
This article has been edited to clarify that team Aquamarine is a sub-unit of MST Echo-11, a preexisting unit specialized in counter-Gamma operations.
Short article done somewhat right.
It’s well written, tone and grammar wise, and the idea is just nice, simple and on the point, my only gripe is that there is no build up, which I feel the article could have benefited from. Even without it, however, it did give me the chills.
4/5
Marco Marchi B. Mark
This didn't impress me. The anomaly that kills you and makes you a part of it is a rather stock premise, and it's not explored any deeper here. I'll admit that I like how unapologetically lethal the anomalous quality is, though.
I expected for the incident to build upon the concept, but it's incredibly short and, at best, only serves to show the anomaly acting as an active threat. I appreciate that there was clearly effort in making the quote here as good as possible, but the italicized fourth wall break text that explains an obvious kind of horror will never not make me roll my eyes.
Some good imagery is here throughout, though I think the incident log drops the ball in this regard. The image itself is really good and a perfect match for the tone of the article.
3/5