(account deleted) 03 Aug 2018 06:27
Just a few tiny things I could spot in your article:
1- I think the proper term would be "Personnel" instead of "Personal".
2-
Following detonation, procedure Quebec-0 are to be initiated to prevent catastrophic loss of life
Procedure refers to a set of guidelines to follow, however the term is singular so procedure Quebec-0 is to be initiated.
3- Plural of niche is niches, no apostrophe.
4- All of it is no more dangerous than a child's board game. The contraction "it's" doesn't really work and seems a bit wonky.
5- So called anomalies.
That is all I feel needs work, aside from that the dedication you put into this article really shows. I like the way the different tabs are for different categories and the changes on the article are pretty neat. The last tab is what makes this article amazing. Upvoted.