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(account deleted)+5. This is the best RPC. Better than 866, better than 666, better than 009, even better than 067. All will tremble before the - P L U G - W A L K E R S -
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Tone needs work throughout, though primarily the 2nd and 4th paragraphs. In addition, there seems to be so grammatical inconsistencies throughout the description. Overall, I would recommend you to do a few more proofreads and tweak sessions. The wording in particular could be a lot stronger.
The concept is meh tbh. I never found this whole thing interesting, so the concept doesn't really grab me.
A group of bipedals with a social structure? Doesn't seem that interesting to me.
There isn't enough substance nor nuance to make this an enjoyable read. Too black and white for my tastes.
2/5
One of the best concepts I've read so far on this site, and I can't tell if I think this ironically or unironically. I don't know, maybe its just because "Plug Walkers" rolls off the tongue very nicely.
I also liked the focus on individual entities that have different traits. Makes it feel personal and realistic.
Perhaps from an objective standpoint this isn't too great, but it charmed me all the way through, and that's enough to make me give this a 5 star.
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