Nicely done. Are you going to name it on the series page?
I'm missing something here- why did they reclass it as Neutralized if there's a Malaysian murder ghost wandering around?
Yeah, it's fairly well-written until it gets to the last part, then it's just like "AndThenTheyAskedUsToGetRidOfTheGhost,SoWeDid,TheEnd".
Is it possible to upload videos to wikidot instead of using YouTube? It really damaged my immersion.
I agree. I think you can add .gifs or something like that.
This was enjoyable. I think the logs left something to be desired. There was the potential for something more enthralling but it ultimately fell flat for me. 4 stars
Edit: Changed my vote to a 2 star. It really was a massive let down that they hardly explored the complex. It's a very surface level article.
the exploration logs feel like they're building up to some huge creepy discovery or other event, but nothing ever happens. sure, the ghost gets out, but that doesn't change anything about the core anomaly. what was stopping her before?
it's trying to be a spooky location with fancy logs but there's nothing here to latch on to.
This article was something of an anomaly (ha), because the realistic details are smart and enjoyable, but the anomalous parts are a letdown. The description made me think, "that's it?". Why is the RPC the entire building when the only noteworthy thing is the ghost?
The exploration logs are alright at best. Unfortunately, I don't think I've ever read a particularly good RPC that placed all its weight on exploration logs, and this has a lot of the same problems. Most of the significant details in the logs were pretty much given away in the containment protocols or description. The climax of the article was the event it already said would happen in the third paragraph.
The description was okay. The logs were not as boring as I feared they would be, but still dull. 2/5