Any testing of RPC-120 is to be conducted by a Researcher with level one clearance or higher.
- I'd recommend changing this to Level +2 clearance as personnel within Level +1 mainly consist of non-employee of The Authority, and are typically granted to personnel working in clerical, logistics, or janitorial positions.
In 75% of cases, affected individuals commit suicide within ██ days of reading RPC-120.
- Why is the days needed to be redacted? How can personnel be aware of their timely deaths prior to their exposure to RPC-120?
Foreword: It has been 3 weeks since D-6750 has come into contact with RPC-120. D-6750 has been given pen and paper to communicate.
- Again, you've redacted the days prior to their exposure as mentioned above, so, why isn't the three weeks part redacted?
Conclusion: The Interview wasn't quite convincing nor appealing, because it was just asking 'asking the D-Class's day' then they draws something, and then the Interviewer concludes the meeting because of the drawing made by the affected subjected.
You've put a lot of effort into this, but the idea could've been a bit more interesting by referring to its background history. All in all, I wouldn't say it was great. -1
