I hate myself for not hating this article, but it triumphs over all its "spooky mysterious anomalous location" peers with a half-decent understanding of how to write an actual mystery. This one also wears its influence from SCP-087 on its sleeve, borrowing many of its positive aspects while drawing attention to the details that set this piece apart.
How is it great? Simple. IT DOESN'T SHOW ME THE SCARY THING. You have no idea how surprised I was to find out that the author appreciated the significance of this. Additionally, the dialogue really isn't half bad. It's a little straightforward and stock overall, but the characters don't just speak like sock puppets.
It's not all perfect though. The worst part, by far, is the dependency on redactions. This article is generally pretty good at leaving aspects unexplained without feeling like the writer is bullshitting and doesn't know the answer, but these redactions gave me that impression. Not to mention that "The Authority knows but isn't telling you" is a much lamer mystery than "Not even the Authority knows".
The logs are a bit repetitive and exhausting, though I suspect this was intentional on the author's part. Building suspense, really washing the concept over on your mind. Intentional or not, I thought that was clever.
Predictably, the tone is clunky, though it was at least clear to understand.
At a length of 31 meters (102 feet), it is far too long to reside normally within the building in which it resides.
…Reside. Also, is the conversion to feet really necessary?
Anomalous properties manifest when a being capable of experiencing fear enters the adjacent hallway.
This sounds silly and is obvious foreshadowing. How about "a sentient being"? Or take away the explicit description altogether and just say "a subject".
Subjects who have a timid personality are documented to immediately turn away as if to avoid the door and attempt to leave the area as quickly as possible if allowed.
This is not a direct effect of the anomaly, nor is it significant.
One researcher, designated "Observant" will observe and document the expedition test.
"Observant" is an adjective. The noun is "observer".
Overall, not a bad show, especially for its age and general format. The combination of mystery, suspense, creepy imagery, and religious themes can sell this one. Just when you think the author has fully run out of ideas, something new and creepy comes up.
Subject: "It is a show of respect to bow your head for those who have passed."
Sheesh. Gave me chills. 4/5
