RPC-043 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-043.

evergreen_meridian 03 Jul 2018 02:17

not sure if you care here but here is my image sources
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Generator_FB-59-009-C1-01_01_1.jpg
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:The_lower_bracket_of_the_30,000_kilowatt_waterwheel_generator_which_Westinghouse_Electric_Company_8d20042v.jpg

Ed Jay Linger 03 Jul 2018 04:19

You should post this on the Final Drafts forum if you haven't already , because this RPC needs more exposure, given its quality. On that note, I loved what you've created here. The lore you've created is especially great, but my favorite aspect of this article is without a doubt the growing sense of urgency and impending doom this RPC exudes. The atmosphere you've created here is phenomenal. Can't wait to read more from you.

evergreen_meridian 03 Jul 2018 04:25

thanks, i appreciate your feedback a lot, glad my first article was well-recieved

Sense Offender 10 Jul 2018 20:10

Fucking OOPS.

+1

evergreen_meridian 11 Jul 2018 01:47

it might sound corny but this is honestly close to what i was going for
i'd like the reader to think, once they got all the details, "oh man, we really fucked up"

Un-fisico 14 Jul 2018 13:37

It's a bit too hard to understand at a glance for me to give the plus one, not to mention not having a strong narrative hook, but the concept is quite interesting.

kaisermutt 23 Aug 2018 18:24

Funny how the least plausible part of this article is that the USSR and US conducted join operations in the 1950s. The only thing I'd suggest is replacement of AU with some other unit, since there is no reason RPC-043-1 would need to extend anywhere near the distance between the Earth and the Sun

H F Dummie 17 Sep 2018 05:18

I like this concept and execution, but there still exists some tonal errors that damage my immersion.

3 now. 4 if this gets improved.