Good concept, but you need to proofread your're work.
There are a few uncapitalized 'i's and some awkward phrasing. Also, isn't a bit unprofessional to have a doctor coddling an RPC? Overall, I do like it, but until you fix the grammar and stuff, I'm going to have to downvote :(
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(account deleted)I am not the greatest fan of this article. It's cute, but poorly described.
It suggests in the article that the anomaly is simple "magic" and flat-out admits that all of the anomalous properties it displays are "unknown." Despite this, it's still classified as an Alpha-Class (safe) anomaly and allowed free roam of the facility. This seems like outright clumsiness on an in-universe level. As a reported sentient entity, the Authority has no way of knowing if this thing is honest in its supposedly good behavior and benign intentions. This is especially confusing considering this thing was spawned by a SADISTIC CULT and the Authority don't even seem to bat an eye. This would make sense if the pumpkin had some kind of manipulative psychological properties that induce an "Awwww" factor in those exposed to it, but this is not specified to be the case (and even if it were the case, we would be looking at a much, much different RPC).
"it is capable of speech by ways that are currently unknown" — is this all we get? We have a talking pumpkin but no investigation into how this is possible? At least some kind of research into this is warranted, I think. Even a test as to the origin of the soundwaves emitting from the object. This thing alone would be very easy to test and could provide insight into some of its properties.
"inside of RPC-228's pumpkin are seeds that manifest in an unknown fashion." How about a little more than this? Have the Authority never bothered to peek inside of the gourd for an extended enough time to observe the seeds being spawned? Do they appear out of thin air, or do they somehow grow out of the pumpkin itself? Are the seeds literally incapable of manifesting if they're being observed? These details are not made obvious at all in the article. It is also denoted that the seeds are a "biohazard," but no effort is made to elaborate on why this is in any official capacity (the possible implications in the provided interview notwithstanding). All of these phenomena have limitless potential for research, but none of it is taken advantage of.
I also find it slightly questionable from an immersion standpoint that the Authority would willingly obey an anomaly's desire to be referred to by a cutsey name. It's like naming your chickens before you kill them. The Authority should know better than to personify anomalies like this, in case something goes horribly wrong and they don't have the heart to mistreat it.
Polite -1 from me. Just seems a little too benign and poorly researched for a serious entry. I would rescind this vote if there were a few more addenda with legitimate research into the pumpkin's anomalies rather than just handwaving them as "unknown". The Authority is about Research, Protection and Containment. Benign acceptance of seemingly unexplainable phenomena should be above them.
I had a short chat with the writer in the Discord. What happened is that the incompetence of the cult caused Malvyn to come out all friendly, instead of a cruel, destructive force. That said, her demonic instincts will resurface on rare occasions. So she’s kind of got a Jekyll and Mr. Hyde type deal. That would probably depress anyone.
Her demonic instincts will resurface on rare occasions.
That's not indicated in the article at all.
It is hinted at in the interview log, but I agree that it could do with more elaboration.
There is no in universe way that the Authority would just leave it at that.
Also, how or why are these seeds appearing? Has any observation been attempted? Why are they to be considered biohazardous?
So little is explained and apparently unknown about this thing, yet the Authority is going to let a sentient RPC just walk around unsupervised getting its ego soothed by any passerby, with the exception of 'bed time'?? When did the Authority become a daycare unit?
-1 from me.
Not a fan of this one until some things are addressed.
1. There is nothing in the description about what the seeds do. I get it is in the interview but it should be in the description if it is known.
2. Same as above but with the recovery story.
3. The site and doctor are censored in the containment procedures. Especially for the site, why?
Pumpkin is friend.
I like pumpkin. +1.
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Even if RPC-228 is about a cute pumpkin with tons of pumpkin porn attached, there are many glaring holes and problems in RPC-228 that would cause it to get removed. I don't understand why it's at a 26+ rating too.
What is the significance of RPC-228-01 and why should we be worried about it? All it says is that RPC-228-01 is a "biohazard" without giving any explanation to what it is.
He mentions how the seeds grow into plants when exposed to skin. It tears through skin and that's why it is a biohazard.
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