I wrote SCP-1548 in considerable haste, basically coldposted it, and was never super satisfied with it. Aaaand then it became my most popular article on the site, and I was never gutsy enough to change it. This article represents what, in retrospective, 1548 should have been.
What will you do about the original article?
Great stuff by the way.
I honestly like this one more, it feels a lot more polished, more detailed. Making it act more personal is a nice touch, too.
Here's to more great articles from you.
Great edits, Pincier. I never thought the original needed much work, but the personal touch and the addition of the FTL communication anomaly makes something phenomenal.
Bloody hell that was funny and interesting. Good thing I moved on to RPC after all the recent bullshit.
Welcome to the community.
Man, I always loved The Hateful Star, and just wondered whether or not it was gonna come over here, after hearing that you had deleted it from the SCP site. Glad you did m8, and I think you made it even better now.
Seems we won't need to worry about a shortage of good pieces for a while, given the already great content on here.
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The first one never really struck a chord with me, but this felt like it had a lot more soul put into it. I like the more personal insults too, rather than the vague ranting you had before.
+1 from me, great job.
I kinda miss the old things it said, but I think whether its ominous messages or foul-mouthed insults are better are up to personal preferences. I like this version in its own ways, too. +1
However, I DO think that the previous low-res black/white image gave it a much better atmosphere. It made the article feel a lot more real and ominous, but this high-res colored artist's rendition just doesn't do it.