On more than one occasion, RPC-XXX can has been seen teleporting away.
Sometimes they will teleport with a child, but will only teleport the child back after 10-15 seconds.
but on case 004
RPC-XXX placed his hand on his shoulder, disappearing for approximately 5 minutes before teleporting back.
I'm guessing this is an exception of the rule? You should point it out
In some cases, if a child is left with a gift such as a toy or a plushie, neither parents nor hospital staff could explain how the object in question appeared.
If a child is left […], neither parents or hospital staff could […]. That's not how it works. You want to use Present Perfect to connect the past with the present in this case
In some cases, if a child is left with a gift (such as a toy or a plushie), neither parents nor hospital staff have been able to explain how the object in question appeared.
Security footage has failed to capture any signs of the entity's presence or movement in the hallways.
Although the children have reported seeing RPC-XXX, there have not been confirmed instances of the entity seen by medical staff, parents, or security footage.
I would reword it as follows:
Although the children have reportedly sighted RPC-XXX, there have not been confirmed sightings by medical staff, parents, of security footage.
The entity seemingly only consistently appears at night between the nurses' shifts or when parents are asleep.
You should specify what hours of night/midnight the entity appears
- This paragraph is one big rundown sentence.
When a wish exceeds what is physically possible (e.g. "I want to fly," "I want to see the Statue of Liberty," "I want to see my dead dog again,"), RPC-XXX will teleport them, going out of sight to fly, or a location that is hundreds of miles from their original location, to manifest illusions hallucinations that affect sight, sound, touch, and in some recorded cases, smell and taste. that is indistinguishable from reality.
If the Authority has so far been unable to record RPC-XXX taking these children away, then how do we know it gives them hallucinations in the first place?
Marie wished to see her mother, who had died two years prior, "one more time." An on-site agent who was present to observe RPC-XXX witnessed and reported seeing a third unidentified individual entering the hospital room and proceeding to embrace the girl. The individual who claimed to be Marie's mother spent the next 40 minutes of the subject's life at her bedside. The agent reported that shortly after the subject's passing, the individual kissed her daughter on the head and whispered, "I'll see you soon," before fading out of view. RPC-XXX was reported to have also haivng left shortly after.
I thought this was within the realm of wishes that are not physically possible…? What happened here? Doesn't this contradict what was previously established in the Description?
