Site-███ has been decommissioned
Redacting a site, even if decommissioned, is not advised on containment protocols. You're better off adding a new site not presently taken on the site index. That way you can label it decommissioned and add See RPC-706 at the contained cell.
Off-sector duty reintegration, must be requested and approved by Site Director ████ ████████.
Similarly to my comment above, you should come up with a name for this guy, too.
doccument
fatally compressing him in the spot
It's hard for me to understand and believe a ship's bow would have you implode, which is a better word than compressing here, too.
Officer Noah Wilson, Officer Edgar Torres, Officer Simon Lee, 21, 22, 19 years old respectively; all members of ACI Unit Delta-02.
I think you're better off omitting the ages of the victims and letting the reader piece that together by scenario. This stands especially true for the incident at the school.
It is currently up to debate whether RPC-706 can choose its future location or not, especially in the case that if it's sighted by multiple people.
To aid in containment, Sector-γ was oficially created on January 1, 2025.
Try:
Sector-γ operation began on January 1, 2025, to aid in RPC-706 containment.
Once contact was established with RPC-706, inmmediate containment efforts were made.
CSD-1822 was sent on a solitary search party, and came into direct contact with RPC-706 shortly after. He was then transferred to Sector-γ
CSD-1083
I assume this is by mistake and you meant 1822. If not, carry on.
forcefully dislocating her left foot, and breaking her left-fourth cage a rib on impact.
This is oddly specific to include in a containment attempt. You'd expect this on an autopsy report rather than here. Regardless, it's informal tone.
Dr. Hastings was moved to the Medical Wing for inmediate emergency treatment and cleaning procedures disinfection.
RPC-706 was notoriously found absent from its containment chamber.
I don't understand what you meant by notoriously here.
[Sgt. Werner takes one peek inside both the chamber in which RPC-706 manifested in, and the chamber it was translated transported to. He then, reaches for his radio.]
[through radio] Copy that Handsome; sending the maintenance team.
Spoonfeeding to the reader. We can deduce on our own they're using radio to communicate.
And it didn't dissapear when you put it down, correct?
it's happened.
Researcher ███. █████████ was observed noticing a flood originating from one of the sinks in the women's bathroom, then doing a double-take before resuming activities. When interrogated, she confirmed the prescence presence of ''black hairs, that dissapeared the moment she looked again''.
Unnecessary redaction unless, by some chance, they happened to sign a will they'd rather have their names redacted from this report, which I find unlikely and somewhat pointless.
After reluctanctly agreeing on being reassigned as CSD-1923, she was then, transferred to Containment Unit 03, within Sector-γ.
the explosion flattened the entirety of Site-███, and incinerated 2.5Wkm2 of forest.
Contact with RPC-706 was then, established by Sgt. ██. █████████. The remains of CSD-1923 have as of yet to be recovered , not been recovered.
Again, unnecessary redaction.
it might end up erasing Bouvet Island off the face of the Earth. We can't risk loosing another facility again. -Dr. Hastings. -Dr. Hastings.
I think you can include a line here along the lines of ", and God knows having to explain and cover that nightmare up" for better effect.
and we don't feel like finding out the wrong way.
Try:
and we don't intend on discovering the consequences once we do.
As for pocket dimensions, The Authority has yet to find one that is stable enough to maintain sustain RPC-706.
Then it could come back, crashing down on us.
We'll consider this,. if you can figure out how to train vet blind people into maintaining to operate a space station. And Besides, I've always wanted to go to space.
I suggest - Dr. Hastings be given a paragraph break for each quote, too.
