I'm not the greatest with clinical tone, so let me try my hand at rewriting a couple bits for easier understanding.
Object Class: Omega-Purple/Neutralized
Okay, why does it deserve to be Omega-Purple? Either this is an EXTREMELY dangerous entity or you just put it there because you think it sounded cool. Omega-Purple is relegated to anomalies that not only threaten all life on the planet but need excessive containment just to make sure they don't kill all life on the planet… what will an anomalous Roblox game do to eliminate all life on Earth?
RPC-493 games thumbnail have change into 16+
First of all, it should be "RPC-493's thumbnail after changing to include '16+'", also why is this important? You don't explain
Containment Protocols: RPC-493 was kept to be under containment. Due to the spreading of these entities in the game that have been very dangerous in each sections of Liminal Rooms such as Section A, U, B and C.
Researches and the Roblox company are observing RPC-493 and many entities in the population whatsoever. They are responsible for RPC-493 and the games control. But however, the game was 16+ and the game owner SCPSARECOOL said that it is true. The community of Liminal Rooms is dead. Amazing! Co. Hub will investigate this game.
This can be instead:
RPC-493 is to be kept under constant surveillance by Level 3 personnel or higher. Due to the nature of the entities found within the virtual reality of RPC-493, special precautions must be taken with handling the anomaly.
Why does the Roblox company have to be involved? Also Amazing! Co is NOT affiliated with the RPC Authority.
I also noticed that 'Liminal Rooms' is an actual game on Roblox, and directly referencing pop culture media like video games and what not without an interesting twist is mostly frowned upon on the site.
NEVERMIND THIS CRIT IS FOR NOTHING
