Critter's Note: I dislike the containment log, especially paragraphs 1 & 2. It focuses heavily on name-dropping organizations, without actually conveying any information about who or what they are. My critique in this section will primarily focus on rewriting these segments to convey the narrative more effectively.
The Kuznets Doctrine and, by extension, the Twelve-Year Momcilo Plan have been deemed a complete failure. Sustainable containment of GRP-115 has been deemed untenable by either the Ranger Corp or GT alone. In place of eradication policies, GRPC affiliates on HIOST are to advise members to refocus their report on the sustainable development of new anti-Celluit detection/fail-safe equipment. Gatekeeping sensitive information while maintaining our third-party cooperation, such as with the Human Medical Journal (HMJ), is essential to prevent a public crisis.
The Galactic Treaty, along with its high council, has unilaterally recognized GRP-115 as a galactic threat.
Due to this shared animosity, the GRPC has been granted special permission by multiple alien parties to consolidate their resources when fighting this menace. Under orders of Fleet Admiral Kuznet, his office's Twelve-Orbits Momcilo Plan will see FRONT-COM & NULL-COM mobilized in GRP-115 hotspots. Most GRP-115 are expected to be eradicated within this time.
A commercial ship advisory warning against all "Capture and Cooling" Expeditions on GRP-115 colonies has been issued. Until an intelligence-sharing policy has been advised between Blue Book Delta Command and the Directorate, all internal funding towards sustainable farming or plasma-hunting expeditions involving GRP-115 has been terminated at the request of GD-Null. AA Liaisons Aaron Siegal and Thames Gordon have been by her administration to handle the abrasive policy shift during the upcoming Quarterly Earnings Call with The Human Medical Journal, the Kubushi Agriculture Trust, and NuTani Pharmaceuticals LLC.
The Twelve-Orbits Momcilo Plan has been deemed a complete failure. After incurring heavy losses and failing to meet projected results, many GT-aligned forces have rescinded their willing support, leaving many at risk. To compensate, the GRPC has begun advising lesser space-faring powers on how to defend themselves from GRP-115. Some notable initiates are the Monocerian Parliament, Blue Book Paramilitary, and United Clans of Isko.
Note: You can add footnotes here to emphasise why each of these three groups is weaker than the galactic powers.
F01-SCRAMBLR technology is advised to repel GRP-115 instances, while dummy K01 emitters are advised to lure and repel large clusters of GRP-115 for escape pods and personalized vessels. These technologies are standard issued across all GRPC-compliant vessels. Legal challenges to the EBR to adopt this technology as a regulatory standard for all mass-orbit vehicles is still pending.
Asset and territory denial countermeasures that are effective against GRP-115s include F01-SCRAMBLER and K01 Emitters. The former tool, which can fry compromised ships, denies GRP-115 asset and data acquisition. The latter device lures large clusters of GRP-115 away from vital assets, buying valuable time for those in compromised locations. Both these technologies are standard issued across all GRPC-compliant vessels. Currently, diplomatic and logistical challenges are the primary obstacles slowing down the distribution of these implements. If the respective parties have the infrastructure to produce these countermeasures, schematics should be sent using ALOS Radio.
