Now, Time for your weather forecast!

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Now, Time for your weather forecast!

DuskNeoka 07 Aug 2024 23:57

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Re: Now, Time for your weather forecast!

DrXOUBLE D 11 Aug 2024 06:25

Hello this is part 1 of my critique, but I honestly think you should reorganize the order of your article. You have a bunch of differing threat colors and you repeat the object class, description, etc multiple times throughout the article.

The article itself is not bad, but it is confusing to get through and I believe that if you can compromise by choosing one Object Class and Color and detailing its forms in multiple differing paragraphs instead of the info drops throughout the draft, I think it would make the article better.

Also I do not know if you know this, but if you want more critique to upload your article faster you may want to join the RPC Discord. People there will be willing to help you. You can find the link by clicking here.

Re: Now, Time for your weather forecast!

DuskNeoka 11 Aug 2024 16:10

Sorry, but I have a general distrust to the discord, plus I am a minor. I have pretty different views on stuff compared to the other members so me joining it would be a terrible idea (and I would immediately become uncomfortable).

Re: Now, Time for your weather forecast!

DrXOUBLE D 17 Aug 2024 06:27

Ah okay. Well if you need any critique with your draft or decide to repost it, I'll try to get to it as fast as possible to critique it again. I'll also see if I can advertise to others to give helpful criticism so you can upload faster.

Good luck 👍

Re: Now, Time for your weather forecast!

televisionist 20 Aug 2024 03:42

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