RPC-608 / Discussion

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Credits 4 Crit

Bro dude 03 Jul 2023 19:48

http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-16011379/teton-land-squid

I'd like to thank Looted, Abbefalkon, TV Stand, and Double Denial for their crit on this.

MF_TOMB 03 Jul 2023 20:39

I said it would be five stars without the stupid mistakes and now you have fixed the stupid mistakes so it is five stars

Last edited on 23 Jul 2023 23:53 by MF_TOMB Show more

Abbefalkon 04 Jul 2023 11:40

Alright, this has improved since the critique I gave on it, so good on you.

However, the last addendum, even though creatively a nice idea, was a bit repetitious and stale at times. Also, if the anomaly reflects it's most recent hunt, why wasn't it showing Amerigo instead? These kinds of plot holes make me iffy-iffy about the article.

I'd rate it a 3.5 if possible, but it isn't. I think I'll give it a 3 for now, but that may change later.

Nitpick

Why is this "███████ Arbuckle" redacted in the discovery log? The name is told to us later in the victims log.