elongted > elongated
Other than that don't think i see any other flaws. Dont think it needs to be changed in that regard.
Reads like a common ghost story, except it has residual ghosts. I think this would bring around 3 star rating.
But i enjoy the idea that the entities slowly fade away or leave, maybe you could explore or develop that bit more. Say, if they fade away, they could be depicted as havjn less of a heat signature, which could mean they require the image to sustain themselves leading to them leaving trying to find it n then they being spotted at the pictures location.
I read your entry. In Mexico we got these devilish little creatures called Chaneques, which is what your article reminded me of. They're like Gnomes, but they're invisible and they also stole at least 12 pairs of individual socks throught my childhood.
Due to your article being short, consider what I suggested and do what you wanna do with them.
Grammatically speaking, nothing really stands out as wrong. Good job!
After the object's arrival at Site-012, personnel reported experiencing phenomenon phenomena not attributable to other anomalies at the on-site.
I lied! Unless I'm wrong and phenomenon is also a valid word for plural.
Items would move to different locations when unobserved, light switches would flick indepently, and doors would randomly lock. At times items such as jewelry, keys, and coins would go missing entirely. These events were not definitively linked to RPC-XXX until an unrelated experiment involving thermal imaging discovered heat signatures resembling the figures depicted within the painting.
I do got a little bit of an isue with this bit. You'd think the Authority would be smart enough to review security footage to see what happened to the missing items, once they figure out it wasn't a thief they can properly identify. Here's how I'd solve this issue very quickly
These events were not definitively linked to RPC-XXX until a security footage review involving thermal imaging discovered heat signatures resembling the figures depicted within the painting.
You can also follow up this detail in the next paragraph.
Further investigation revealed that these entities were emerging from RPC-XXX and actively interacted with the environment, at which point the object was transferred to isolated containment at Site-181. It has remained on isolated containment ever since.
Like so! That should flow better, and be less vague within the constricts of MinCon