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(account deleted) 26 Dec 2022 23:00

Hey y'all!! Second mincon entry!! super duper thanks to qual, ttpy, and spambot for their help, and of course proto and his bud Illucifuge for the base concept of "cannibalism to be reborn through pregnancy" idea.

see ya

crit thread here: http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-15473540/mincon-enter-again:memoirs-of-a-blood-bather

image is from here: https://www.abebooks.com/servlet/BookDetailsPL?bi=3975101372&searchurl=yrh%3D1810%26yrl%3D1800%26pt%3Dbook%252Cart%252Cms%252Cmap%26xpod%3Doff%26bi%3Dh%26ds%3D30%26bx%3Doff%26sortby%3D100%26recentlyadded%3Dall&cm_sp=snippet-_-srp1-_-title20#&gid=1&pid=1

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televisionist 28 Dec 2022 00:20

The evolution of this article has been fascinating to watch with all the little tweaks. I think themes should be expanded, as the article's emotional impact feels a bit meh. But I'm not giving it a three: It's well-rounded, asks decent questions, and doesn't overstay its welcome. What it lacks in intrigue, it compensates with good construction, which is evidence of a very competent writer being at the helm.

Oddly though, I question my crit after seeing the final version. While I think I was onto something, with a greater clarity given to the narrative, I've warmed more to what the piece is. I won't doddle anymore. A clean 4 stars. Very good job.

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(account deleted) 28 Dec 2022 20:34

tyyyy 🧡🧡

JimmyBoyHaha 07 Jan 2023 12:20

while not perfect, i'm still giving this a 5 because the anomaly's effect and the story presented in this article are horrific. makes you wonder just how many copies of himself that guy created. +5

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(account deleted) 29 Jan 2023 07:30

ily ty

Abbefalkon 18 Jun 2023 18:58

Holy shit, as someone particularly sensitive to sexually-themed articles, this disturbed me. The last addendum leaves just enough for the imagination.

However, It did take me a couple of re-reads as well as as scouring through drafts to fully comprehend the text. The first time I read "when consumed by a pregnant woman" I thought it was a typo of some sort, the idea of cannibalism didn't really click. You would expect that confusion to cease after reading the last addendum, though it didn't. I was a little bit bewildered by the fact that the book was written after the events of addendum 3, so the anomalous effect was replicated by Elizabeth after?

Even if I was confused for a bit, I got it in the end and my personal bias makes me rate it 5/5.