RPC-784 / Discussion

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BetterMyButter 26 Dec 2022 23:00

Hey y'all!! Second mincon entry!! super duper thanks to qual, ttpy, and spambot for their help, and of course proto and his bud Illucifuge for the base concept of "cannibalism to be reborn through pregnancy" idea.

see ya

crit thread here: http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-15473540/mincon-enter-again:memoirs-of-a-blood-bather

image is from here: https://www.abebooks.com/servlet/BookDetailsPL?bi=3975101372&searchurl=yrh%3D1810%26yrl%3D1800%26pt%3Dbook%252Cart%252Cms%252Cmap%26xpod%3Doff%26bi%3Dh%26ds%3D30%26bx%3Doff%26sortby%3D100%26recentlyadded%3Dall&cm_sp=snippet-_-srp1-_-title20#&gid=1&pid=1

Last edited on 26 Dec 2022 23:01 by BetterMyButter Show more

televisionist 28 Dec 2022 00:20

The evolution of this article has been fascinating to watch with all the little tweaks. I think themes should be expanded, as the article's emotional impact feels a bit meh. But I'm not giving it a three: It's well-rounded, asks decent questions, and doesn't overstay its welcome. What it lacks in intrigue, it compensates with good construction, which is evidence of a very competent writer being at the helm.

Oddly though, I question my crit after seeing the final version. While I think I was onto something, with a greater clarity given to the narrative, I've warmed more to what the piece is. I won't doddle anymore. A clean 4 stars. Very good job.

Last edited on 28 Dec 2022 00:21 by televisionist Show more

BetterMyButter 28 Dec 2022 20:34

tyyyy 🧡🧡

JimmyBoyHaha 07 Jan 2023 12:20

while not perfect, i'm still giving this a 5 because the anomaly's effect and the story presented in this article are horrific. makes you wonder just how many copies of himself that guy created. +5

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BetterMyButter 29 Jan 2023 07:30

ily ty