They are rage, brutal, without mercy. But you. You will be worse.
On the Top 5 best RPCs ever, this shit is the BOMB. The amount of effort put into this from all fronts is absolutely incredible. It's one of the few articles that have actually made me tear up a bit, so congrats on that as well.
6 stars if I could.
That exploration log was a fucking jumpscare. Mucho texto.
Good shit regardless.
Very heavy read. Some dialogue is rough with some grammar mistakes. But I know I am never going to read something like RPC-929 ever again no matter where I look, and it’s left an itch only re-reading can scratch. I agree with your mom though this should be a book get this published ASAP. qntm published his antimemetics work and I for one would love to hold a Jokezm novel in my hands. Keep writing or else.
Also I love this to death. Thank you for posting it I owe you one
Sat my ass down to read through this for almost 4 hours. It truly deserves the standing perfect score. Few articles accomplish such lengths with little to no bloat, and with no bores either! I couldn't help but play it as a movie in my head as I read through, perhaps that's why I'm consistently a slow reader. Although I'll say that the logs are vivid enough it made this exercise of mine more than worthwhile!
A few grammatical nitpicks that maybe worth addressing.
[RPC-929-2 aims its pistol RPC-929-1.]
I can't no let that happen.
Where used to live, I wasn't very loved…
civcillian
Even though I saw you cry over a over a tiny little knife.
RPC-929-1: I don’t know… It just do.
CSD-6868: I don't know if you're bulshitting, y'know that?
I noticed some collapsibles were not matching the dates like so:
<Continue Log, [XX/XX/20] ALTR-929-A>
Was that intentional?
Since the begining
There are others I'm sure I missed. If we are to assume the typos on intertitles are of Carmille's making it's plausible, but I can't say the same in dialogue.
Excellent stuff. I tend to shy away from longer articles fearing sunk-cost fallacy, I can't say I regret my time here.
Nor can I say I didn't groan in frustration in reading the description's current version…
