Der Fischer Und Die Magische Leiche / Discussion

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TheGreatTarbolin69 22 Sep 2022 03:57

Crit thread: http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-15208682/hanging-on-a-thread

That was a close fucking call…

Anyhow! This is my first attempt at RHYMES within a tale, and I hope people like it. Obvious references to a certain dou of brothers in the tale.

El Dios del mare…

Big Mark 28 Sep 2022 11:21

I am astonished, this has really improved since the original draft. You’ve done a wonderful job, Tarb. Be proud.

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Marco Marchi B. Mark

ICFD 03 Oct 2022 00:13

To write anything that rhymes halfway decent is a massive challenge. The fact that you've done a fairly good job of it is quite impressive indeed.

The article captures the general feel of a fairy tale quite well, while still keeping in touch with the elements of the contest and the Authority.

There's a few grammar mistakes and I'm not sure how I feel about the cliffhanger ending, but it hardly detracts from the work overall.

Well done.