HANGING ON A THREAD

HANGING ON A THREAD

TheGreatTarbolin69 22 Sep 2022 03:17

I FINISHED IT

http://rpcsandbox.wikidot.com/der-fischer-und-die-weise-leiche

GIVE CRIT

Re: HANGING ON A THREAD

Superspambot 22 Sep 2022 03:41

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The fickle flame of a candle in on his desk, the only source of light in the dark of the night.

Allowed to the words to flow more easily

He did so knowing he would likely never show what this parchment holds— expect except to his family, when he returned home

Perhaps it reminded it him of the times his mother

They've been hold told that, once, there ##ffd500|there once|| lived a fisherman

staying pass afterlight after dark to all reel [I have no idea what ur saying here]

Oh Fisherman, I pray prithy thee

This vessel barely holds, and it shall give you no aliment. ailment My flesh rots and sickness' pungent. Please, cut this these wires and I shall give you ye anything the heart desires!

Nothing more than a barely-human create creature sitting in a boat too-small too small for its size.

A creature most terrible, the mother of all sea terrors, sailors told, was bound to the Sea God

Oh, I'm sure he won't mind. Now go, do ask I ask

Re: HANGING ON A THREAD

Malfestance 22 Sep 2022 03:53

a cannibal witch who bloated children and feasted on their entrails while still alive.

Would sound better as

a cannibal witch who bloated children and feasted on their entrails while still they lived.

Very good, I like it. Rhymes here and there may be stretches with regard to the number of syllables but it's nothing to anyone who's just trying to read to enjoy.

Last edited on 22 Sep 2022 03:53 by Malfestance Show more