Bearer of pestilence sustaining itself by spreading it is cool idea but then it goes from getting too technical detailing benign features of the anomaly like its height to never delving into what would be worth looking into like a written record of someone discovering it or curious behaviors interacting with it; I assume that's the point of the capture attempts. There is a lot of bloat in the article and sentences reading like a field researcher taking notes rather than a formal document, as shown in the capture attempts adding nothing new to what's already been established in description. This also shows in excerpts like:
For most people, this effect is weaker than disinfectants.
and then dive too deep to safely track
that is a bringer of disease
from some other location, perhaps the British Isles
became especially animated
increased energy may require the installation of noise proofing in its containment building
Things Learned:
I also fail to infer what the redactions add to the article. If it's to prevent malevolent forces from extracting RPC-495 residue it should state that's a thing, but I'm left to assume this when the reason is never alluded to. It comes off random.
Cool idea but needs rewriting what's already here.
