though its influence in Western Europe was limited by the division of the Roman Empire.
To
though the division of the Roman Empire limited its influence in Western Europe.
Proper Grammer
playing an important role
To
playing an essential role
Medical Tone / Proper synonym
and its anomalies were subsequently acquired by the Auctoritas.
To
and the Auctoritas subsequently acquired its anomalies.
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authority as a result of Byzantine
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authority due to Byzantine
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Christian heresy which holds
To
Christian heresy, which holds
Missing comma
formed in order to protect
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formed to protect
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Notable actions taken by the military include defending the Exarchate of Ravenna from Arian barbarian raiders in 772, assisting admiral Pope John VIII to capture a pirate base in 876, and repelling an invasion by the Aghlabid Empire with Islamic anomalies during the Raid on Rome in 869.
To
Notable actions taken by the military include
- Defending the Exarchate of Ravenna from Arian barbarian raiders in 772
- Assisting admiral Pope John VIII to capture a pirate base in 876, and
- Repelling an invasion by the Aghlabid Empire with Islamic anomalies during the Raid on Rome in 869.
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when Pope Leo IX was captured by the Norman army at the Battle of Civitate in 1053.
To
when the Norman army captured Pope Leo IX at the Battle of Civitate in 1053.
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Roman Emperor who proceeded
To
Roman Emperor, who proceeded
Missing comma
Authority as mobile specialized teams.
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Authority as specialized mobile teams.
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A surge of anomalous warfare occurred during the Crusades, making a resurgence of anomalous capabilities in the Papacy, and the beginning of the era of the Auctoritas
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A surge of anomalous warfare occurred during the Crusades, making resurgences of anomalous capabilities in the Papacy and the beginning of the era of the Auctoritas.
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the intention of forming this
To
the intention of starting this
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centralize the wide network
To
centralize the vast network
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against attacks by Islamic forces, and the Latin Empire against Greek mercenaries.
To
against Islamic forces' attacks and the Latin Empire against Greek mercenaries.
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threaten the Papacy, and
To
threaten the Papacy and
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biblical anomaly that was brought
To
biblical anomaly brought
Extra wording not required
Many of these artifacts fell into the possession of the Ottoman Empire, which enabled them to conquer the city of Constantinople in 1453.
To
Many artifacts fell into the possession of the Ottoman Empire, which enabled them to conquer the city of Constantinople in 1453.
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Europe in order to combat the
To
Europe to combat the
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Papacy. Traditionalist Catholics
To
Papacy. Traditionalist Catholics
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States, a Catholic military force that could put down
To
States. This Catholic military force could put down
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newly-formed Authority. These
To
newly-formed Authority. These
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republic in 1849, and
To
republic in 1849 and
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The Primacy formed an alliance with
To
The Primacy allied with
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until the Cold War, when
To
until the Cold War when
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positions and has become
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positions. It has become
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institutional church. As the
To
institutional church. As the
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Papacy consisting of the Apostolic
To
Papacy, consisting of the Apostolic
Missing comma
the Pope, who has
To
the Pope. He has
Proper period placement
which is overseen by the Pontifical Commission
To
which the Pontifical Commission oversees
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Rome and authority to
To
Rome, and authority to
Missing comma
Every successive Bishop of Rome is believed to be ordained with this apostolic power
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Every successive Bishop of Rome is believed to be ordained apostolic power
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Therefore, it is the Roman Catholic Church that holds supremacy
To
Therefore, the Roman Catholic Church holds supremacy
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Body of Christ, therefore only
To
Body of Christ; therefore, only
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practices that go against what Christ's
To
practices against what Christ's
Needless wording
of the Church when the mystical
To
of the Church. When the mystical
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participate in the breaking of the bread and wine.
To
participate in breaking the bread and wine.
Needless wording
bestow "spiritual effects".
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bestow "spiritual effects."
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nature, which are united together
To
nature, united together
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becomes flesh, and adopts
To
becomes flesh and adopts
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Messiah, and so accepted crucifixion and death on the Cross in order to restore mankind to life.
To
Messiah and accepted crucifixion and death on the Cross to restore mankind to life.
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bestowed them from the Lord,
To
bestowed upon them from the Lord,
Proper grammar
After the cleansing of their soul
To
After cleansing their soul
Extra wording not required
fire which is prepared for the
To
fire prepared for the
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angels, as well as sinners
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angels and sinners
Needless comma and extra wording
God but the substance
To
God, but the substance
Missing comma
eternal duration of it remain
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eternal duration remain
Needless wording
separation, because the
To
separation because the
Comma not required
divine justice who are prophesized to come separate
To
divine justice, prophesized to separate
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The Apostate Angel known as Satan was
To
The Apostate Angel, known as Satan, was
Missing commas
abilities, and claiming
To
abilities and claiming
Needless comma
the physical laws of the universe will fall apart
To
the universe's physical laws will fall apart
Proper grammar
survivors and the souls and bodies of the dead
To
survivor's souls and bodies of the dead
Or
survivors, souls, and bodies of the dead
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old realms will pass away and there shall be a new Heaven and a new Earth.
To
old realms pass away, and there shall be a new Heaven and a New Earth.
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and his endless kingdom forever.
To
and his everlasting kingdom forever.
Proper synonym
worldview which modern archaeology,
To
worldview that modern archaeology,
Proper grammar
anomalous community. Our scholars understood long ago that relying on medieval religious theology trapped us in an outdated worldview that modern archaeology, rationalism, and science had thoroughly disproved. Those anomalies we do know about that "prove" Catholicism pale in comparison to the vast number of gods and objects that contravene and overwhelm it.
To
anomalous community. Those anomalies we do know about that "prove" Catholicism pale in comparison to the vast number of gods and objects that contravene and overwhelm it. Our scholars understood long ago that relying on medieval religious theology trapped us in an outdated worldview that modern archaeology, rationalism, and science had thoroughly disproved.
Proper grammar
aesthetics and tradition; a
To
aesthetics and tradition, a
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supernatural elements, the anomalous
To
supernatural elements. The anomalous
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figurehead in Rome, but
To
figurehead in Rome but
Comma not required
our comprehension; some
To
our comprehension, some
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are free dedicate all
To
are free to dedicate all
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