Compromise Authority / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page Compromise Authority.

Crit Thread:

DonnyFox 22 Feb 2022 01:26

http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14523597/compromise-authority

House Opera Glass 22 Feb 2022 18:50

An absolutely stellar tale that lets us live out the fantasy of brutally killing some senior staff of a certain other writing website pedophiles.

5/5

(account deleted) 01 Sep 2022 23:44

what

Von Pincier 22 Feb 2022 23:05

I think this has some great dialogue and some tight action, but it does this weird future tense thing a lot. I think reconjugating it all in past or present tense would help it flow a lot better.

redgi110 30 Oct 2022 21:40

Mark was in a hurry, even if these bastards had no value as sources of information, 4 CSD-L3 to feed another Gamma or Omega wouldn't hurt

High Gamma 06 Dec 2022 18:43

Great dialogue as always, that is to say, your choice of using future tense does act me up a lot. 5 stars well deserved