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I have re-read this article today, since I forgot to give it crit back in the day sorry mew (not sorry). Some of the issues I had with this article back in the day have been fixed now apparently, mostly the use of certain informal adjectives in a clinical document.
Yeah, this is one of the good ones. Easy to understand, and easy to fear. Although ecological threats are never my cup of tea, I can't deny how downright chilling this would be for anyone else. Certainly one of the better articles to recommend for begginer readers and writers alike
Good job kid! 5 stars well earned!
No real overall complaints. I like the imagry you created, I love the map. It's a simple concept with easy follow-through. My only gripe, and the reason I'm rating this a four, is cause there really isn't anything gripping or anything that gives me inherent stakes. The article is a good story that's well structured (dare I say immersive in its protocols, even) but the anomaly just kinda gives me the vibe of "oh, hey. yeah, that's cool," vibe and nothing more. In many ways, it kinda feels like an elevated Series 1 SCP. Weird, funky, with just the right amount of lore to spice it up.
It's a damn shame you don't write more, Mew. You're easily a very solid writer. Keep up the good work, my dude.