this guys a little bit like dark souls i think
It takes a second to catch what the point of the article is but it’s worth it. Solid article with solid writing and most of all the dialogue carried it with ease the likes of which aren’t often seen. I’m happy that it wasn’t cringe and god I don’t wanna say it gets deep but it really does get deep.
5/5
Marco Marchi B. Mark
The one-sided phone conversation at the end was really special. I love it when an article is also very educational; I didn't realize all these facts before.
Firstly, Apologies for originally forgetting to add this when posting the article. This article is a rewrite of the SCP Article “Disney On Ice” by PixelatedHarmony, then using the moniker Roget.
PixelatedHarmony gave me permission to rewrite this article, and to be sure, I had them look at the article multiple times during the drafting phase.
Also here is the critique thread
http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14430355/walt-disney-article
I know it's been a while since this came out but I honestly wanted this to be my first crit.
This is the first RPC article I read about a year ago and I really do love it. I don't usually like writing with deeper meaning or symbolism but what got me with this is that it lured me in with this arguably still relevant, well known concept that I had never really seen anyone do anything with, then it got deep. Big fan of that. I like how it avoids Bollywood speech writing, it reads well. I have to admit I'm biased though because it was this one that got me interested in RPC.
5/5
