I F*CKING love this article!!!
I have always liked anomalies that managed to entrance themselves into the world. And I don't just mean this only in the context of the lore, I also mean it in how an actual irl asteroid with an actual location was put in here. That part was just genius.
598 also having interactions with other rpcs is also really neat. The dialogue was pretty good, I really liked everything. (Honestly it's then most other character-based rpcs).
Lastly its length was perfect, it did what it needed to. And kept secret the things that it might expand on later.
5/5