If the vehicle RPC-604 is riding comes to a stop, [DATA EXPUNGED].
That's pretty [DATA EXPUNGED] if you ask me. You don't have to tell me what it does, but try at least hinting at it. I want my brain to fill in the gaps, but you presented me with a blank piece of paper.
All attempts to follow RPC-604 after it leaves the road have failed
Why is that?
Footnote 2 is not really necessary.
If I understand: The interview is spread across two entires? If yes, you should make it more clear. Give a title to the interview and begin the 2nd part with [Continued].
Also, when making revisions of RPC within the article, using different tabs would be good (so one tab with Gamma-Orange version and one with the Neutralized one).