Hello.
altercation-hazard
It's alteration. An altercation is like a fight or argument.
RPC-XXX is a Class-B visual-based Cogintohazard and infohazardous entity. The knowledge of RPC-XXX will result in the subject being affected by RPC-XXX's anomalous properties. Said effects are permanent and will harm the subject when said subject forgets the details regarding RPC-XXX.
RPC-XXX is a Class-B visual-based Cognito and info hazardous entity. Individuals possessing knowledge of RPC-XXX will cause it's anomalous effects to manifest. Said effects permanently affect the victim. Once the subject loses memory of RPC-XXX, it will then proceed to harm the subject.
TBH this read a lot like NDI's A-003
Assignments and containment
What does this mean?
RPC-XXX are to be conducted by personnel affected by RPC-XXX's anomalous properties.
Why?
The phase [DATA REDACTED] is known to aid in remembering RPC-XXX and its important details, if you are currently affected by RPC-XXX; please see your site administrator for the full phrase.
Is it phrase or phase?
be extraterrestrial, with elements deviating from the typical-terrestrial elements.
I am sure that they can still be identified. And what do you mean by "typical terrestrial elements"?
humans and animals capable of higher cognitive function and memories.
humans and animals of higher intelligence.
Subject
Subjects
colorful colors
This is repetitive, just say colors.
becomes
become
RPC-XXX's secondary anomalous traits.
You never explained it's primary traits. Are you meaning that it is made of odd material?
the said subject.
In RPC grammar, it's said subject. Be careful of grammarly.
RPC-XXX can manipulate its physical shape, volume, and mass at will. However, this ability is primarily used when attacking.
First, you never said it was mobile, how would it attack if it's just a jump of clay that can move in place? Second, the way you worded this makes it sound off and out of place.
While RPC-XXX is physically contained in Site-063, RPC-XXX is able to appear simultaneously in multiple locations. RPC-XXX will appear at the affected subject's physical location to attack the said subject.
nvm.
sudden cardiac arrest.
Why?
RPC-XXX cannot be captured by photographs or video footage. However, photographs and/or video footage can be obtained from RPC-XXX in its containment chamber.
What. Also why in the world would the Authority put a cognito-hazardous image onto the document.
dormant/hibernate by default.
How do they know this if it isn't even "alive"? Better to just say dormant.
deviates from the standard color spectrum wavelength
What does this mean? Is it displaying colors that we can't even perceive? Cuz we can't see all the colors as we don't have enough cones and rods in our eyes and receptors to pick up those colors.
That's it. There are a lot of conceptual issues with this and I didn't find it too "alien-y". You never really explained where you think it actually came from, which can easily be done by studying its materials and comparing and contrasting with other planets. The logistics in this article are not realistic too.
Otherwise, it was a cool concept and I think that if you kept going at it, that it can be something pretty cool.
Where there is a choice of two evils, I choose both.
Mama is in the house, and she got some crit to give!
Hazard types
I usually say that, but even in a redacted/limited access version, PLEASE use the images for hazards, it really immerses the reader more into the skip and it gives it a more realistic style.
Abstract
Well, surprisingly, it actually does the job better than I thought. It gives the reader enough information to understand the risks of the cognito/infohazard while also (probably? what do I know, I'm not the author) preventing readers to be affected by the effects of the skip. Pretty good job so far.
SH&U
It also does the job, but, in my opinion, since it is a cognitohazard and an infohazard, it should be recommended to circumvent the object altogether and just contain the spread. Because someday, all personnel currently under the effects of the skip will just not be existent anymore, and it would be very risky to expose new personnel to its effect.
Containment Protocols
Personnel assigned to RPC-XXX with Level 3+ clearance are eligible to assist in other projects and research, under the condition to keep RPC-XXX on a need-to-know basis from others.
I take issue with that. Because to begin with all information within the Authority is delivered to personnel on a need-to-know basis, why state it here again? Seems pointless to me.
An MST Taskforce comprised solely of MST Personnel affected by RPC-XXX is permanently stationed in Site-063's containment wing for RPC-XXX.
Also an issue here. An MST affected by the skip's effects will run out of personnel pretty soon. Pretty sure of that.
Description
higher cognitive function and memories
Just simplify to "higher cerebral function"
Subject viewing the colorful colors of RPC-XXX
Unclinical.
Research Notes
I have nothing to say about those, they are pretty good actually.