This article is like a monkey paw for me.
RPC as a universe is a great chance for some interesting sc-fi tech. It can create such strange designs and bizarre warfare. A great mix of fantasy and cold realism is something that I am ecstatic for that was wasted here I feel.
Before I grind this into dust I must say that this format is great and I will most likely use it and look forward to seeing more of it. ya did good on that lad
This article has a severe case of techno babble to start with. My favorite example of this is "tungsten reinforced steel composite metal foam". The babble in this article makes want to throw myself out a window.
Magic can be very strange a good example would be trepanning a form of exorcism where someone gets a fucking hole drilled through the skull. Geomancy is basically turning crude sand drawings into a complex mathematical equation. Then I look at this and its like: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8oWAb5NVALw
this dollar tree fantasy paste has nothing interesting going for it I have to say. Very lame
Also how come this is so over powered It just easy counters things that snap the rules of reality like a twig with just some scribbles. they aren't even cool scribbles
edit: who ever put that as critic pick I will not stop until I find you./s
Almarduk and BetterMyButter does not match any existing user name for critting my article!
DrPierson and
televisionist for helping a bit with the article's format.
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