Some stuff copied over from Discord:
All three constellations are potentially associated with the Underworld and its associated entry point in ancient Babylonian astronomy. The presence of a non-anomalous occult group within Piriápolis sharing such beliefs has been established.
Why is this in a footnote?
Grammar seems to be on point- immediacies seems like a strange word to use but other than that, nice work.
RPC-927-01 instances are impermanent.
I'd say temporary instead- impermanent is a bit of a strange word to use in this context. Nice fix!
After an undefined period of time since manifestation (between 48 hours and 60 days), they stop being visible.
"stop being visible" isn't super clinical imo Fixed : D
Satisfaction of personal projects of the individual linked to the appearance of the instance
Elaborate on this one a bit?
For instance, RPC-927-01 instances associated with individuals whose families live in the outskirts of Piriápolis are substantially more luminescent
Helpful footnote is helpful, but also needs a period. Done!
And the poem is beautiful.
Other than that, no real complaints. Solid and steady article. I can't help but say that the formatting feels a little off- I think the image may not mesh well with the text or maybe it's the bars between each section? Hard to say.