RPC-428 / Discussion

This is the discussion related to the wiki page RPC-428.

TomatointheMirror 01 Jul 2021 15:21

well it only took me three years, but I've finally posted something
thanks to: DrXOUBLE D, Von Pincier, Kloth2 aka RetroKloth, Excer, Clench, pixelatedharmony, and Almarduk

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JasonMakesManhattens 01 Jul 2021 16:38

You missed one of your XXX’s at “ See Interview XXX-02”

While the additions since the draft thread do add to the overall article, it still feels like less than it otherwise could be imo. But even if there is untapped potential, what is present is still decent.

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Mandran 03 Jul 2021 18:52

So wait, are RPC-428-A "fake", do they actually come from "somewhere", and what is exactly thier "company".

They'are pretty confusing otherwise great article, +4

TomatointheMirror 03 Jul 2021 21:23

mild spoilers

are RPC-428-A "fake"

yes, they are controlled by an outside source (who is also responsible for the rain)

do they actually come from "somewhere"

the -As? no. whatever's controlling them? yes.

what is exactly thier "company".

that's something I left to reader speculation.
the "company" may or may not exist, the -As aren't a very trustworthy source. pick whichever explanation you like best.

Jokezm 04 Jul 2021 04:43

minor crit but the Animated Hazard isn't really necessary. It only accounts for objects that aren't supposed to move on its own.

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5150wned 05 Jul 2021 23:36

4/5 overall

4/5 premise. Narrow focus with wide range of speculation left to the reader.
5/5 delivery. Clinical and to the point, but still engaging. The style fits the premise.
5/5 grammar. Well done.