RPC-334-NC / Discussion

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ieatcrepes 04 Jun 2021 04:18

Numeralitis [ Noo-mur-uhl-eye-tus ], noun, (numeral + -itis)

1. the irritation and inflammation of the parts of the human brain that process numbers and quantities, particularly those metrics that over-saturate the neurons with dopamine
2. a pathological and obsessive dedication of one's time and mental real-estate to numbers that act as stand-ins for self-esteem or self-worth

Check out the Non-Canon RPC Hub!
http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/non-canon-hub

Thanks

Thank you to Anderlouxe, Almarduk, and H F Dummie for their crit and suggestions, also to TTPY in Discord for some pointers.
http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-14104781/rpc-rough-draft

Image Credits

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Near-Earth_object#/media/File:Comet_Hartley_2.jpg - Public Domain
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/NASA_insignia#/media/File:NASA_logo.svg - Public Domain
UNAAC letter template taken from UNAAC Hub:
http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/unaac-hub

Last edited on 08 Jun 2021 21:24 by ieatcrepes Show more

Eh.

EpicGamer42069 04 Jun 2021 18:38

Epic?

Last edited on 04 Jun 2021 18:38 by EpicGamer42069 Show more

HugePillock 07 Jun 2021 05:49

You could honestly be a scriptwriter for a TV show or movie. Very well done.

Croal 09 Jun 2021 05:13

It is a fun read. Nice job!

0ktober 17 Jun 2021 12:44

This was a pretty cool article. The gold flakes and truffles tangent kinda took me out of it though.

Overall I’d rate this a 4.25 if I could. 4 stars will have to do.

Edit: Oh fuck I just realized it’s a tabview. Shit.

Shouldn’t the old iteration have been a threat level purple or black? You could theoretically input the Earth itself as a peg, and destroy the Earth by rapidly shifting capitol.

The last two tabs are pretty awesome. Rerating to a 5.

+ crit

He's an easy one to move with the money, let’s create an account for that.

Run-on

called up on to be the saviors of the Earth

upon*

consists of nations with powerful influences in terms of political, military, and/or economically.

This line is grammatically nonsensical (unsurprising since it came from a hub written by Pierson, but it should still be fixed.)

Also you are inconsistent which punctuating footnotes. Even the ones that are incomplete sentences still sometimes have periods when they shouldn’t.

They will forever think they missed out on 10 billion when they are their children are getting more than that back over time.

they and their children*

Last edited on 17 Jun 2021 12:58 by 0ktober Show more