Authority personnel are to prepare for occurrences of RPC-361 near the beginning of February1 until the end of the month.
"Authority personnel should be on standby for potential occurrences of RPC-361 at the start of February, when manifestations of the anomaly peak before gradually subsiding.
public celebrations
What specific public celebrations?
The nature of RPC-361 makes manifestation within a public setting very probable with direct prevention of RPC-361-1 creation unfeasible
"The nature of RPC-361 renders a high probability of public manifestations, making prevention of RPC-361-1 instances unfeasible. Extensive collaboration
and as such requires significant collaboration between the Authority and the HKSAR Government; the Hong Kong Police Force is to alert the Authority of any manifestations and secure a perimeter to prevent contact between civilians and RPC-361-1.
"Extensive coordination between the Authority and the HKSAR Government is imperative, with the Hong Kong Police Force required to notify the Authority of any RPC-361-1 instances and establish a perimeter around them to protect civilians. "
Also footnote what HKSAR stands for.
Agents are embedded
"Agents are to be embedded"
Could this be a task for MST X-Ray-6 ("Annulifers")?
Following the termination of RPC-361-1 instance/s, the corpse/s will be delivered to the nearest hospital and discretely transported back to Site-038 at a later date.
Upon the retrieval or termination of RPC-361-1 instances, their remains are to be promptly transported to the nearest hospital and subsequently to Site-038, using discreet methods and protocols."
RPC-361 denotes the phenomenon that targets ethnically Han Chinese performers of dances that involve the mimicking of an animal or otherwise non-human creatures through the usage of costume.
"RPC-361 denotes a phenomenon which targets individuals of Han Chinese descent who are engaged in the performance of animal-based or non-human character mimicry dances, using costumes and choreography to illustrate the creatures they represent."
slowly conjuring the image of a beast during performance.
Conjuring in what way? Mentally?
Through this it is assumed
"It is currently assumed"
The hallucinations subjects experienced during RPC-361 and the subsequent loss of control over their body leads to suggestion of a haunting by an ectoplasmic entity, but this theory was never confirmed.
"The hallucinations experienced during RPC-361 and the subsequent loss of control over their body may suggest the presence of an ectoplasmic entity, though this theory has yet to be confirmed unequivocally."
This is commonly believed to be the moment in which subjects' consciousness is taken over by an external force
I have a hard time understanding this sentence. "It is widely suspected that the onset of RPC-361 results in the subject's consciousness becoming possessed by an exterior entity."
playing their part in greater unison and coordination than before
Not necessary to add.
through the forefront RPC-361-1 instance.
The forefront RPC-361-1
Unclear about this phrasing of "forefront"
Both leg muscles and bones begin to increase in mass, expand, and reorganize themselves: The knee bone is expelled, with the fibula extended and shifted to the back of the tibia. The metatarsus reduces in size and splits from the instep while the metatarsals and 4 outer phalanges enlarge. The transformation concludes with the distal phalanges breaking apart, protruding from the top of the toes through the toenail to form into claws. The resultant structure resembles the forelegs of a quadrupedal animal.
"Both lower limbs enlarge in mass, as the corresponding muscular and skeletal structures in the legs gain in physical volume and undergo spatial reorganization within the body. The knee bone is displaced, accompanied by the expansion of the fibula and its rearward displacement relative to the tibia. The metatarsus loses volume and separates from the instep, while the outer phalanges and metatarsals enlarge. The transformation concludes as the distal phalanges fracture and protrude through the toenail, sprouting into claw-like structures that resemble the forelegs of quadruped animals."
I think much of this could be footnoted but I see the value in having a vivid description of the transformation process.
RPC-361-1 will continue their acts of aggressions until the removal of one or more instances or the costume's head from the main body,9 resulting in the breakdown of the performance or otherwise rendering it unable to continue.
"RPC-361-1 entities will continue acting in an aggressive manner until the removal of one or more other instances, or the separation of the costumed head from the main body, resulting in the breakdown of the performance."
At which point surviving victims' vision will change, with RPC-361-A bursting into flames and the sounds of explosions being constantly heard, followed by a bright flash of red colouration that precedes their return to consciousness.
"Once the RPC-361-1 entities have been neutralized or incapacitated, surviving victims' visions will shift to a graphic depiction of RPC-361-A spontaneously bursting into flames, with the constant sound of explosions emanating from the body, followed by a radiant flash of crimson that precedes their return to consciousness."
Victims suffer no additional effects beyond the injuries sustained during the event. The lower bodies of forefront performers do not return to normal, usually resulting in death from the ensuing health complications.
"Victims suffer no additional effects beyond the injuries sustained during the event, however, the lower bodies of forefront performers do not return to normal, usually resulting in their death from the ensuing health complications."
Police were dispatched to the scene shortly afterward and engaged the anomaly after the injuring of one of the responding officers. The instances were then terminated via gunfire after further injuring two officers when attempting to flip over their car and causing the near-death of one officer.
"Local police were quickly dispatched to the scene shortly afterwards and engaged the anomalies after a responding officer became wounded. Upon further injuring two additional officers by attempting to flip over their patrol vehicle, nearly leading to the demise of another one, the instances were neutralized via a lethal barrage of gunfire."
The officers and the two deceased instances were then brought to the New Territories West Cluster Hospital where the physical changes to the forefront instance are noticed during examination.
"The officers and the bodies of the two deceased instances were promptly transported to the New Territories West Cluster Hospital for further evaluation. During the initial examination, the physical alterations to the foremost participant (participants?) were observed."
MST-Romeo-7 is deployed to amnesticizie all witnesses and retrieve the body.
"MST-Romeo-7 proceeded to amnesticizie all witnesses and retrieve the body (bodies since it's two dancers?)."
Following a second occurrence in the following year, RPC-361 is recognized as a phenomenon and designated afterward.
"After a second manifestation of RPC-361 one year later, the incidents were recognized as anomalous phenomena and consequently designated.
is being held
"was being held"
The performance in question involved a modified Lion Dance costume, with its appearance altered to that of a fish's head, the inclusion of serpentine features, and extension of the body, allowing it to be manned by a 5-men crew.
"The performance in question featured a custom Lion Dance costume, with its exterior altered to resemble the appearance of a fish's head, as well as the inclusion of serpentine features and a longer body, permitting it to be operated by a 5-men crew."
First responders arrived at the scene attempted to arrest the 5 instances but were met with opposition by the venue organizers. It is only with additional officers arriving at the scene and RPC-361-1 beginning to attack the attendees that a fenced perimeter could be erected around the entities as Romeo-7 is being deployed to the scene.
"First responders arrived at the location and attempted to arrest the 5 instances, only to be met with resistance from the organizers of the event. It was only with the arrival of additional officers and the beginning of aggressive behavior from the RPC-361-1 instances that a guarded boundary could be established around the entities, as Romeo-7 arrived on the scene."
Containment Log 361.7
Think this header would look better bolded or underlined.
"That's uh… It doesn't sound good, no?"
Suggestion: "That uh…doesn't sound very good, no?"
"Well, no, that's even better, take two out and it will collapse like Jenga.
Suggestion: "Well actually, it's even better. We take just two of them out and the whole beast will collapse like a Jenga tower."
"That's the guy before me isn't it?"
"That's the guy who was before me, isn't it?"
a reassign after discharge.
"reassigned after a discharge"
for the meantime.
"in the meantime"
we'll still have to prepare for a schism
Suggestion: "we'll still have to prepare for a skirmish."
Well it's still swimming as is so I will go with "No".
"Well it's still swimming, so I'm gonna go with "No"."
"Ah shit, it's closing in on the civilians."
"Ah shit, it's closing in on the civilians!"
"How'd you like that you water-filled piece of shit."
"How'd you like that you water-filled piece of shit!"
began research
"started researching"
the Authority is able to masquerade
"the Authority was able to masquerade"
Originally, yes. As it currently is, the termination of a non-physical body is not possible with our utilities, then and now, but in the moments of its plundering? An attempt is certainly warranted. Every so often it does not appear. It raised a few minor concerns, it is only after we have heard of an incident in Gao Ping from our Vietnamese delegates that we began to suspect the anomaly to have expanded beyond our northern Central Provinces. And only through our inquisition that we have found Hong Kong to have become quite a hotspot for it which, and I must reiterate, the Authority has failed to mention to the Committee.
I had a hard time understanding this paragraph. "Originally, yes. However, considering the current state of the anomaly, we do not possess the adequate resources to eliminate its non-corporeal form. Nevertheless, an attempt during its periods of emergence is warranted. We had noticed every so often the manifestation would sometimes fail to occur, and this raised some concerns. Only after we heard of the incident in Gao Ping from our Vietnamese delegates did we suspect the anomaly expanded beyond our northern Central Provinces. It was only through our investigations that we discovered Hong Kong has become a highly active region for this anomaly, a detail which, I must emphasize once more, the Authority failed to disclose to the Committee."
anomaly, needless
"anomaly, but needless"/"anomaly. Needless"
We have underestimated
"We underestimated"
Then that is sure to prove that PCAAO's involvement is not wise for the containment of RPC-361.
Suggestion: "Then that clearly proves PCAAO's involvement with any containment efforts for RPC-361 would be an unwise decision."
Neutralization
"neutralization"
Operatives
"operatives"
Instead, post-incident interviews conducted at nearby village indicated that local men began spasming, before breaking into the village's warehouse, taking the 11-meter long Fire Dragon prop located inside.
"Instead, post-incident interviews conducted at nearby village indicated several local men had been observed experiencing muscle spasms, prior to breaking into the village's warehouse and stealing an 11-meter-long Fire Dragon prop stored therein."
Command: Today I shall bring upon you, a death fitting of the accursed…
Is Command supposed to be saying this or RPC-361-α?
coordinating and charges
"coordinating and charge"
RPC-361-α and continuously
"RPC-361-α, continuously"
Cockroaches! Release that which does not belong to you!
CSS error bolding the text.
Unkown 1/Unkown 2
"Unknown" is misspelled
were explained to
"were revealed to"
