crit 4 crit cuz I said so..
RPC-110-J is a West African male of height 220 cm (7.2 ft) and weight 165 kg (363.8 lb) with
RPC-110-J is a West African male with a height of 220 cm (7.2 ft) and weighing 165 kg (363.8 lbs), …
physical strength estimated at 3750 horsepower
if I am correct horsepower measures speed and whatnot so I would change this to newtons (SI)
Unless this the speed he can travel or whatever.
It is demoralizing.
I would change to "It's demoralizing!"
"He's a menace to the site. I can't walk by his containment chamber without him flexing his arms at me and pinching his hand in a way that's clearly insulting to the size of my muscles. My muscles are huge! I work out every day and my muscles are bigger than anyone else in the facility. But apparently that's too small for 110-J. Fuck this guy."
I couldn't stop laughing at this. This was funny!!
RPC-110-J cannot break through
forgot a period
Notes: It is apparent that no physical material is capable of containing RPC-110-J.
how does one test show he can't be stopped?
I found this pretty funny. 3/5 some things needed to be rewrote but I loved this article. Good luck!