Due to indeterminable factors that cannot be accurately described or identified, a Blackfall manifestation cannot be predicted at this time.
Blackfall refers to an inexplicable phenomenon manifested by RPC-063. The causes and reasons for the phenomena remain widely debated. Dr. Maria Mayson from the Astronomy Department hypothesized that the event may be correlated to the Earth's orbital inclination and a solar eclipse.
Before the incident on 06/1998, solar eclipses continuously occurred four days in a row; the causation of these eclipses was unexplainable at the time, but during these occurrences the behavior of RPC-063 was reported to have been irregular by security personnel.
The following is an [theorized] outline event of a Blackfall manifestation, based on information and on-site instruments recordings during the time of the incident:
This entire part is immensely confusing to read. I genuinely do not know what you meant by this.
an unknown wave of energy
an unknown phenomenon of black haze develops
The usage of "unknown" here is incorrent. "Unknown wave of energy" implies that this individual wave is not known, rather than the energy itself. Plus the energy is known to exist, so I feel this description would be better served by poorly understood or unidentified. This applies for both lines.
While the particles were mostly present in various samples, it is most likely that they may have originated due to the manifestation.
What does this line mean?
It was very hard to follow the narrative of this article, especially the final letters. It feels like they were written in an attempt to create an "old-timey" feel that ultimately made them more confusing.
Furthermore, I don't think I follow the connections between different parts of the article - what does 063 becoming a "demon" have to do with lower ACS? Why are they cognitohazardous? Etc. Is there some sort of implication I fail to pick up — especially in the Blackfall event part that refers to a portal to another dimension opeing —?
+3 as of now.
