Fleeting Friendships / Discussion

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First Tale

JoMike 16 Jan 2021 16:32

So This is my first tale, its a bit long winded but hopefully it captures the essence of what the PCAAO is all about.

here is all the crit:
http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-13838267/new-draft-this-time-its-a-tale
http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-13954404/new-tale:fleeting-friendships

Thank you very much to Mr Makor, Superspambot, geckovstheworld, and especially TTPY, I think I need to write a whole essay to say how grateful I am to him, since he wrote an essays worth of critique to try and help me.