RPC-567 / Discussion

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Almarduk 13 Jan 2021 22:38

Huge sucker for articles that talk in hopeful/warm terms, although this one is rather simple. Doesn't really go anywhere or do interesting things with its concept. I nevertheless enjoyed reading it — we definitely need more articles in this general tone.

Not really feeling it about the GoI, although I admit that using Mne instead of Mnemosyne is clever.

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I forgot to add this.

Excer 14 Jan 2021 08:01

http://rpcauthority.wikidot.com/forum/t-13973046/excer-3

psychiaduke 24 Mar 2021 14:42

For CSD-1231's entry there's an RPC-XXX leftover.

Excer 27 Mar 2021 16:12

Fixed.

Abbefalkon 18 Jun 2023 14:58

This was a nice read, and the incident-interview combo added a bit of much needed nuance. However, the article suffers from a lack of proof reading.

This gaseous substance, designated RPC-567-2, is a bright red colour

"Bright red colour" is used as a noun in this sentence, not an adjective.

The size of RPC-567-2 that is produced varies, with each individual producing various results each time they're tested.

Repetitious sentence. Could be replaced with "The size of each RPC-567-2 instance varies between testing attempts".

Dr. Broadstone consumes RPC-567-1 and exhales approximately 3.76 m3 of RPC-567-2 (10) minutes afterwards. Agent Yellow proceeded to place his hand in it and claimed the sensation as being a 'strong' feeling of guilt.

Dr. Broadstone is replaced by Agent Yellow.

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