I am not ex-law enforcement or ex-military
Rephrase this to say I am neither currently, nor formerly, associated with any police division or military branch
hunting(specifically
Space between hunting and the parentheses. This mistake is made several times, so I assume you've done it intentionally
That aside.
This would work better as an elipse "…"
bullet as seen in this video:
Combine the link in to the above text like this
([)https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HElQk2wEY5w this video]
Just remove the parentheses and you're good
This guide was good, I definitely learned something while reading it, and I am fairly certain other readers will find it useful as well. I am however, a little afflicted on the actual information as it pertains to writers. There isn't much in the way of actually giving strictly writing advice, but I feel like it's open enough that writers can interpret what they want when it comes to the actual writing.
I think for now, leave it alone unless other writers say something. Otherwise, 4/5