Containment Protocols:
from RPC-972's cover building.
Was said building made by the Authority? If not, its not really a "cover building"
An internal cover document for personnel operating within RPC-972 has been created and is to be maintained.
Why (Context from the description: I would assume they aren't dumb enough to not know whats happening)
Description:
Access to RPC-972 can be achieved via hidden biometric scanners within the lifts of PolyU
Hidden how? Who made them? Is PolyU aware of it?
RPC-972 extends downwards, with 15 Sub-Levels reaching 55 meters below ground level, covering a total floor space of 100,800m2.
Is that actual physical space or some type of anomalous "bigger on the inside than the outside"
Because a big ass building underground does not go unnoticed by people
Attempts at reverse-engineering the technology has partially succeeded
It said its non-anomalous in nature, the technology that is, so there is no reason why they could take lets say, an advanced containment cell apart, bring it to Research and see how it was made/what it does. The fact the tech is advanced does not mean its magic.
while replication is possible, most results are only fully functional while within RPC-972.
And this part just seems like a sticker on top to prevent the above from happing, and this also defeats the purpose of it being "advanced non-anomalous technology"
Recci tech or some shit, I'll write this if the article works.
At least try to have the draft complete before asking crit
Discovery:
Though RPC-972 and it's site designation was once thought to be clerical error within the Authority database, attempts at fixing this clerical error resulted in the chance discovery of RPC-972.
Though RPC-972 and it's site designation were once thought to be clerical error within the Authority database, attempts at fixing this clerical error resulted in "the chance discovery of RPC-972."* (The does the part I quoted even mean????)
RPC-972 was designated as the site it was operating as before discovery, Site-038.
Don't put a link to a page that doesn't exit
Addendums:
digitized renditions on the genome of several million types of organisms, and detailed memories on approximately 1300 persons, many of whom corresponded to RPC-972-1 instances.
Sounds a lot like SCP-200, may just be me
Enjoy your free, super-efficient site filled with future technology. Just know that it won't be enough to stop what's coming if you don't do your fucking jobs.
This just sounds more cringe (the tone of whomever wrote this as a whole, looks like a teenager made it) and the message of "something very big and bad is gonna kill you all in X amount of time"
Final Review:
I don't like it, really
It sounds like a budget SCP-2000 with the meaningful text made by a 15yo
The idea isn't really developed, idk why you made it shorter. Its now even less coherent, if you were aiming for the idea you told me